I couldn’t move anymore,
Running from the door laughing;
Followed by him,
I ended up to the wall.
My hands locked behind,
Each moment comming closer and now;
I could feel his breath on my face.
That warmth ;
That shyness on his face.
I was just frozen and,
Didn’t moved an inch;
Might be due to wall or otherwise,
And he went on.
His warmth neutralised the cold then.
A sudden shut of the door,
Brought me back to this world;
Silence kissed my lips,
Left I am,
Still craving..
Beautifully penned Shreya!
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Thanks. It was the first time I ever tried to write something sensual!
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Well done👌💐
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Thank you jay
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Wow!… powerful!
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Thanks!
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🙂
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Ooooh nice!
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Thanku very much…
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Beautifully written!
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Thank you
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Awesome..
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Thanks!
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Eh. This is totally my style.
I really find the subtlety in this endearing. Good job. I’m looking forward to more of these 😄
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Thanks! Yes I really hope I do write more of sensual one.
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So my comment DID get through haha. And yes. I’ll be waiting 😄
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Well-written. Great imagery of you being cold, frozen compared to him being your warmth
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Yes it was actually what it is. Thanks!
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Welcome! I love those ‘subtle’ emotions that amplify the writing
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^.^
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You have scored! This is the reality of so many encounters, in our automated society. Each of them might have loved to slow down, and savour the other.
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Yes, rightly said and thank you.
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Very good poem. Love the line
………Silence kissed my lips…….
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Thank you and I also loved it very much
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Beautifull poem 🙂
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Thank you.
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Beautiful
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Thank you!!
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it’s just happen when you are about to kiss and just waking up from the dream kissing your pillow smiling on your self!
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Hahaa! Though a funny one. Thank you very much.
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Humor is necessary in life 😉
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Very nice poem, Shreya. It’s romantic!
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Hahaa! yes it is:)
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Beautifully penned Shreya.
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Thank you dear😊
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very romantic though, a good read for me
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Thank you so much. :):)
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wc
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