Haiku #7 Love is nothing but past or early stage- of utmost betrayal tThis haiku follows3-5-3 scheme unlike my other haikus which follow5-7-5 scheme. Advertisements Share this:TwitterFacebookGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related 38 thoughts on “Haiku #7” Add yours Beautifully written. 😁 And I believe the usual 5-7-5 format of haiku means the no of syllables, and not the # of words. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Traditional haiku are always the same, including the following features: There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables. The first line is 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. Aah! welcome:) LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Well yes. That’s what I told. 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Aww that’s why I wrote same in the first line:):) LikeLiked by 1 person Got it. 👍🏻 LikeLiked by 1 person 👍 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply A perfect haiku, if rather depressing LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Thank you 🙂 LikeLike Reply a rather profound statement! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Oh’ Thank you. LikeLike Reply Very nice… LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you pantho:) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply You’re welcome Shreya 🌷 LikeLiked by 1 person To me it’s a rather negative outlook on love. Leslie LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Ok! We all have different aspects of everything. I am sorry if u did feel bad at heart.:D LikeLiked by 2 people Reply You didn’t make me feel bad because I do know the other side exists. I just hope you aren’t feeling bad. Leslie ❤ LikeLiked by 2 people Aah! I am happy- happy. I appreciate your concern…. LikeLiked by 2 people 😉 LikeLiked by 1 person I don’t understand LikeLiked by 2 people Reply U want me to make y understand the haiku or…. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Haiku is kind of short poem, right? I don’t understand the content, is it because of betrayal the love become nothing? LikeLiked by 1 person A three lined verse with11 0r 17 sylabbles. Love is nothing means that it is not any feeling that makes us happy but is the pathway to betrayal and anger so it is stated nothing. I know I am not good at explaining but I tried my best to make u understand. Hope u got it:)😊 LikeLike True 😂😂😂😂 LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you Suyash😅 LikeLike Reply so profound LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Glad u found it deep LikeLike Reply There’s an app too… Right ? LikeLiked by 1 person Reply App? LikeLike Reply Haikujam ?? LikeLiked by 1 person Oh’ I didn’t knew about it and just googled. Well that can be related to it but haiku in itself means a short poem. LikeLike Yeshhh….☺👍👍😉 LikeLiked by 1 person How jaded. Hopefully, one day you will be surprised pleasantly. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Maybe but its a sweven. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply (… especially if we fall with what we like to believe instead of what it is…) LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Oh’ Absolutely. Its our over expectations which do not let us accept the person. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply sounds good LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you so much.😊 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply welcome LikeLike Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.