Love is nothing
but past or early stage-
of utmost betrayal
tThis haiku follows3-5-3 scheme unlike my other haikus which follow5-7-5 scheme.
Haiku #7
Shreya Jindal
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Beautifully written. 😁
And I believe the usual 5-7-5 format of haiku means the no of syllables, and not the # of words.
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Traditional haiku are always the same, including the following features: There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables. The first line is 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. Aah! welcome:)
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Well yes.
That’s what I told. 🙂
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Aww that’s why I wrote same in the first line:):)
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Got it. 👍🏻
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👍
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A perfect haiku, if rather depressing
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Thank you 🙂
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a rather profound statement!
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Oh’ Thank you.
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Very nice…
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Thank you pantho:)
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You’re welcome Shreya 🌷
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To me it’s a rather negative outlook on love.
Leslie
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Ok! We all have different aspects of everything. I am sorry if u did feel bad at heart.:D
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You didn’t make me feel bad because I do know the other side exists. I just hope you aren’t feeling bad.
Leslie ❤
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Aah! I am happy- happy. I appreciate your concern….
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😉
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I don’t understand
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U want me to make y understand the haiku or….
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Haiku is kind of short poem, right? I don’t understand the content, is it because of betrayal the love become nothing?
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A three lined verse with11 0r 17 sylabbles. Love is nothing means that it is not any feeling that makes us happy but is the pathway to betrayal and anger so it is stated nothing. I know I am not good at explaining but I tried my best to make u understand. Hope u got it:)😊
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True 😂😂😂😂
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Thank you Suyash😅
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so profound
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Glad u found it deep
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There’s an app too… Right ?
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App?
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Haikujam ??
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Oh’ I didn’t knew about it and just googled. Well that can be related to it but haiku in itself means a short poem.
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Yeshhh….☺👍👍😉
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How jaded. Hopefully, one day you will be surprised pleasantly.
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Maybe but its a sweven.
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(… especially if we fall with what we like to believe instead of what it is…)
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Oh’ Absolutely. Its our over expectations which do not let us accept the person.
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sounds good
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Thank you so much.😊
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welcome
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