Wait,
What else do you want out of me?
I have already given you every thing, I ever owned.
No,
Don’t talk about what I gave you,
Just let me know, what I was not able to give you because,
actually I tried my best.
I was never the person you thought me to be,
rather I was working to become the one you wanted me to be.
Hmm! Hah!
It’s all black and white now.
As I am sitting on this table,
writing,
I wonder, if you still love and miss me as I do you.
As I proceed further
with each sentence,
all the moments we spent together lying aimlessly on the couch,
yet interesting,
run through the pages, in front of my eyes, in a blurry vision..
I try to pen down a bit more,
But then,
I realize, I don’t have anything more to jot down,
Am Iย all done with writing?
Were we together for only a few moments?
I thought I could write down a novel instead jotting down your feelings for me.
I was so fluffed up.
Somewhere, I realize I was the only one trying to save this relationship.
You were not interested in it at all.
I know it was my mistake that I kept on lingering,
but I expected you to love me,
pay me your most attention but you just ignored me.
I apologise.
I will now move on too as you did much much earlier,
I know,
I have a bad habit, to play football in basketball ground with cricket ball wearing baseball defenders.
No, don’t laugh at least.
But why will you not?
I am that funny and stupid to be laughed upon,
I guess. But its reality.
Trust me, I have the habit of making myself available for anyone and everyone.
I do not know what to address this letter with,
And perhaps this is the only reason, why I am just rolling it,
sealing it forever with some molten lac.
‘Cause I know you don’t recognize me anymore……..
Letter to him….

Very beautifully expressed. ๐. Loved it โค
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Thank you so much.:)
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Nice post.. ๐
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Thank you. I’m glad you liked it.
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Wow! Brilliant but sad. ๐
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Aah! yes it is sad. But I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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Profound , sad but beautiful …
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Hey,
This piece perfectly fits into these words. Thank you so much.
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Your welcome โค๏ธ๐
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Well this is the harsh reality of life.. cruel yet true.. the best solution is to forget them, forgive them and move on in your life.. ps- don’t forget to pray for them.. they are going to need it soon in future ๐
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Indeed!
Thank you so very much Purva. I am glad you liked it.
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Thanks Mr/Mrs ย for accepting and following my blog.
I’m available to read your post at my convenient time.
You have such an interesting topic I will love to read in
your blog.
I still remain ย the simple blogger…..
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace โand Love โค
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Hey!
Hahaa I’m too a naive yet. So don’t worry. hahaa
I’m miss. And your blog deserved a follow.
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Thanks for replying ย back to me.
I guess you find my replies to your comment interesting.
Am totally happy I made you smile ย โบ OK…
I really enjoyed such post from you.
Keep the vibes on Mrs Helen
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace โand Love โค
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Am expecting another post like this I just read. You really make my day reading this one.ย
Thanks. Again. You can check me up on my blog also
http://www.patrickrealstories.wordpress.com
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace โand Love โค
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It’s flattering that you really enjoyed it. I gave it a follow.
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Thanks for replying ย back to me.
I guess you find my replies to your comment interesting.
Am totally happy I made you smile ย โบ OK…
I really enjoyed such post from you.
Keep the vibes on Mrs Helen
#PATRICKSTORIES
Peace โand Love โค
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Welcome.๐
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Wonderfully melancholic!
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Thank you so much Malkie.
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Arre comment spam me gaya kya? ๐ค
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Hahaa. Yeh bhi spam main tha. Are your comments not genuine??? *jk*
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Hmmm. Koi na!
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You know what! I can relate to it alot.. i am going through the same!! Well, i wrote something regarding my feelings last night which is abit similar to you, though you have written it so well! It touched my heart!! So here it goes!!
I tried hard each day to be better person for you. I tried to feel each of dreams and wanted to sink mine there too.. i tried hard to make you special.. make you feel good about the relationship we share..
It goes all in vein within a few seconds..
By a few little words..
I wish to go back and rub everything i had with you.. the laughter i shared the conversation we did those nights.. those rides.. which still feels like magical to my mind…
Why do i love you so much that i am still awake and writing for you! Why don’t i shut down my mind and fell asleep just like you!!
Why this happen to me?? M i not good enough?? Don’t i deserve happiness!!
I wish i could sit on the driver seat and can drive my own life!!
Well! It’s my situation!!
Neway wish you have a great life!! Coz girls are the best๐
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I am so sorry Angelina for you would relate. That piece was written much beautifully than mine. But I’m also happy that you shared your feelings. I hope you are feeling all right now. You can contact me whenever you want.
#girls are always the best.โคโคโค
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Thank you for coming to my blog. Your poem may not reflect your life at all. Nevertheless, take care.
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Ah yes! It is mere fiction. You blog was worth visiting lorac.๐๐
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Wow! Wait, is this really you Shreya? I was going to melt already when reading this.. a lot of intense emotions in here. Sending my hugs and love. โคโคโค
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No,
Its not me at all. And is mere fiction Graciiii.
*hugs* Thank you so much.
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Oh I see.. You are so great in writing fiction!! ๐
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Wonderful letter but laced with sadness ๐๐ผ
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Oh yeah, When I’m tired I tend to write something sad. Well! I am glad you liked it.
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Same with me Shreya ๐. My mind goes into overdrive when Iโm tired.
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Beautiful…
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Thank you so much Ushhhh.
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Hahaha you’re welcome Shreya๐๐๐ท๐ท
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These lines are for???????
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HIM. hahaa
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If you have to ask such things,then he doesn’t deserve you. Keep your head held high!
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Hey It would be kind of you if you tell me your name. You also motivate and support me. ALWAYS. And its something I really appreciate.
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I am Gary Boivin
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Ok yes you told me but I did’nt remember. Hahaa
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It’s a beautiful piece. Thanks so much for sharing.
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This piece was waiting for your comment only Rudelle. thank you do much for reading.
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Always happens when relationships turned one-sided. Great you (the character in the fiction) found ur() pride and are ready to move on!
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Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it Jerry.
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You write so well!It’s also really cool to see other indian bloggers grow!Lots of love,keep blogging:)I’d love for you to check out my blog as well<3
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Thank you so much.๐
I’ll be sure to check it out.๐
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haha you made all balls into a wordplay.. ecstatic..!!! Foot ball..to base ball ๐ how sweet
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Oh yeah, I love football soooooo ……. much. Even these dots felt short.๐๐
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HAha//u nailed with balls : P lol
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