While leaving the school today,
He just screamed out, that he loved me.
I joked around.
I told him, that I already knew and laughed again.
I laughed and we moved together,
for some time and then walked
our way to our houses.
He told me to come to his terrace once I’m done,
with my homework and so I did.
At around 6:00 pm, as soon as I finished up with my homework I climbed up his terrace.
To my amusement he was not there
and only a letter was there on the terrace bench.
I hurriedly picked it up.
As I read:-
Hello,
I know you loved me from the day we met.
You always paid me your most attention.
I know I’m being selfish.
Don’t try to stop me or run to save me.
I love you so much.
You were the best thing that ever happened to me.
You gave me a reason to live.
I didn’t want you to get into me with my sadness and hence
I didn’t tell you about it, but I guess I finally did.
If you ever loved me just don’t do what I’m going to.
No, I’m not abandoning you.
I am not capable enough to live with you. You are a princess.
I cannot afford to abandon you.
Okay,
Be happy.
Now just look at me and smile once.
Up here , at the ledge.
Don’t cry just one last smile for me.
Just once look into my eyes and bid me a final farewell.
Your best friend,
Goodbye.
As I finished it off I looked at the ledge and found him standing there staring at me with his teary eyes.
As I smiled and ran towards him, I guess it was too late.
He had already jumped.
What am I now here for?
He is gone.
As the wind blew through me,
I felt my hands stained with blood
For I could not save him despite being informed.
There was a mix of emotions running through me and a nervousness.
I am the culprit and I very well accept it.
My hands stained with blood.
I am a culprit.
And I’ll live with it.
Wonderfully melancholic, i felt for you!
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Thank you Malkie. I am glad you liked it. Well! It was just fiction.
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I guessed that, but I know that writing that kind of fiction can be mentally draining!
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I tend to write something sad when I’m tired. So its just that. Though it can be draining at times. Hahaa
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so sad you leave your school
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Hey, I guess you got it wrong. I left my school to go home as it was over. I hope you got it.
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ok
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😀
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Deep ⭐
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Thank you so much Zankhana. I am glad you felt so.❤❤
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wow! love this one! *insert heart and hugs*
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Thank you I am glad you liked it Graci and beautiful username.❤😁 hugs
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So sad ! Almost cried. 😢
Hope this never happens to anyone.
But very well written ! 👏👏👏👏
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*wiping away the tears*
I am so sorry it made you cry. I had no intentions to, Novus😂
I am glad you liked it❤💞❤
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I did 😁
As long as it’s fiction 😌
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Beautifully done
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Thank you so much sir. I am glad you liked it.😊
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Well done! Moving. *Most probably this comment will end into spam* ✌️😭
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Oh, You know and this landed in spam only. Today I checked if there are any comments in spam and this was there. But how did you know that this will be a spam???
Well! thank you so much Rishhu.
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Welcome! Koi na!
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Oh, my! That’s tragic. Beautifully written.
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Aah! Thank you so much Rowena.
Always appreciated.
❤❤❤
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You’re welcome!
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This had a wonderful feel to it
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Oh’ so I actually did what I was trying to. Hahaa😂😂. Thank you so much.💞
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My pleasure
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Please don’t write such depressing thing, it was like as if it’s truth. At such a tender age, you should write how bold your life is, ready to take risk, which we adult forget it in life.
I am not discouraging to write master piece like this, just that you write in such a beautiful way, I thought you lost a dear one, which broke my heart. As I lost dear ones at young age.
Take care and stay best
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Hey I just wanted to write something sad and at most I could write this. I don’t get a feeling to write something inspirational. Hahaa but I’ll surely try it. Thank you so much for your flattering words Sheedaa and no, you are not at all demotivating me. 😊😉😁
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Such a thing would haunt me for all time. Beautifully written and woven together!
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Thank you so much Gary. I am glad you liked it. ❤❤
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Thank you so much.
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For what?????
……..The post?
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Yes please. You write beautifully. I’m grateful
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Thank you once again.
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You have very wild imagination, dearie!
Pls understand that our acts reflects the real us, as in, “from the abundance of the heart the mouth speaketh”!
Honey, channel your creative energies towards joy and happiness, even when you are tired!
Don’t remind me that next door to happiness, lives sorrow, cause I can never forget…
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Hahaa, I’ll try.
And you are right sorrow lives next to happiness.
Thank you so much Jerry.
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👍
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This is out of this world…loved it dear…
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That”s way too kind. Thank you Rida!
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So sad! So tragic! I felt engaged,
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Thank you so much, Patty!
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