As the last yellow ribbons of sun melted over the horizon,
It felt cold.
I could see a thread line separating the two skies,
slowly dissolving.
I feel totally incomplete today, when you’ve already left me, for the stars.
They were seductive, perhaps?
So much, that they snatched you away from me.
Now a days I don’t do much except for travelling.
Running away from the places that hold our memories.
I’ll run from our villa to a new apartment,
But what about the footprints you’ve left on my fragile heart?
And about these hickeys imprinted on my skin?
They’re slowly turning into bruises, but I’m helpless.
It’s painful.
For the first time today,
this world seemed colossal.
My world began and ended, in the very you.
How can I just let go off your presence even though you’re no more?
I was so very used to you.
They say, habits are hard to change,
And you were my habit.
As I sit under the veil of this dark, mysterious yet mesmerising night sky gazing these dancing stars,
They haunt me.
It’s probably your absence that makes me feel lost in the labyrinth of this sky.
Unlike,
when we used to enjoy stargazing.
My heart is broken but it’ll still beat.
I don’t believe what this day has brought.
Tell me that you’re gone, so I no more keep waiting.
Yeah,
People do become poems when they are no more reachable by mere words.
Don’t they?
Some people don’t leave even when they’re already gone.
They just stay inside, in a different form.
So are you.
Heartbreaking. I still don’t know how you write such tragically beautiful poems at such young age! You are really talented.
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Hahaa. You flatter me, Mona. It’s all fiction.
Thank you so very much.
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Wonderfully poignant, with maturity beyond your years!
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Haha, so it’s the second time youvey commented this. I’ll keep on counting the times.😂😂😂
Thank you so much.
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So evocative
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Thank you so very much.😋😋
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Beautiful piece.☺️ Read your poem after a while.
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Thank you so much, Aman.😉
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You’re welcome Shreya 😊
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Just wow..You really are a good writer! One fan added to your list 😁
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Aah. Thank you so very much. Glad.😉
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Deep… Touching ❤❤
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Thank you so much, Ush.😉
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You’re welcome Shreya😊😊
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This mirrors a situation faced by someone close to me.
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May God bless him/her.
Thank you for reading, Gary.
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As usual amazing, I wonder at this tender age how can u imagine these in fiction too. Way to go girl.
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Hahaa. Thank you so very much.
Glad you like it.💓❤
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Of course, i liked it. How was ur computer exam?
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cool! Haha. It went well.
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Good to hear that…
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You’re very talented indeed! ❤️🌹
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Haha, It’s your wonderful eyes that find me talented always.
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Hahaha. But you are talented. 😉❤️
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Overloaded feeling of joy expressed
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Thank you so very much.😉😉
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my pleasure my friend
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beautiful; love the softness of it, the tender evocation of memory. you have a way with words, but you could definitely do better. Is this possibly inspired by a true event?
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No no no this is just a mere fiction. It is all my imagination.
I will definitely try to do better next time. I am still an amateur writer as writing poems was never on my list.😂
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