Dard kya hota hai ye zaalim kya jaane,
Mout kya hoti hai, ye haiwan kya jaane,
Hawa main ud Gaya ghar uss parinde ka,
Ghonsala kaise banaya tha,
Ye tufaan kya jaane.
Shreya Jindal
Dard kya hota hai ye zaalim kya jaane,
Mout kya hoti hai, ye haiwan kya jaane,
Hawa main ud Gaya ghar uss parinde ka,
Ghonsala kaise banaya tha,
Ye tufaan kya jaane.
Wah, lajawab mohatharma. Kya zubaani shayari kaha aapne.
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Thank you so much, Annaaaaaaa.😋
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Waaah !! 🔥💯
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Thank you so much, Sumeet.
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Oh my!❤️ This is sooo beautiful and poignant
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Hahaa. After a long time. Thank you so much, Sammy.😘😘
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I cannot understand it, but what a pretty language!
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So are you finally back to blogging. After ages that I saw your comment.😂😂
Never mind, this poetry was for Indian readers. Hahaa.😘😘
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I am back in a partial capacity. I have some real life priorities that must come first now. But yes, hello💜💜
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Wow…
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😕😕 Can you understand it?
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वाह बहुत अच्छा लिखा है आपने।
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Thank you so much.
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I am curious person. So I had a translation done by Google translate which gave me an idea of your writings. Very touching. Take care and keep well Shreya. Sending a big hug.
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Thank you so much, Dom for takng all the pains in translating it. Next time I won’t post a hindi poetry.😂😂
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I like challenges! Hihi … You have to keep writing in your mother tongue. It’s part of your culture and who you are. I do the same; it is important for me to sometimes publish texts just in French which is my mother tongue. Keep well Shreya.
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waah…koi jwaab nhi👌👌👌
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Thank you so much.😊
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pleasure is all mine😊
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Jo dil ko lagi baat tumahari
Ye likhne wala kyaa jaane
Loved it❤
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Hahaa. Thank you so much.😘😘
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Agr fursat toh hme bhi pad lijiyegaa ji aapka agr 1% bhi likh lu toh writer keh skenge apne aap ko
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Hahaa, sarcasm. Eh? I knew it.😂😂
Will be sure to read.😘
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Why great people are supposed to be writers i mean just look at u❤
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Will miss you, please visit my site also
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Aww..yeah sure.😘😘
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Quite abstract. Love this type of poetry.
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Thank you, Utkarsh.😋
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wah…tabhi to wo kehlaate hain anjaane…jo apne hain wo to sab jaane…
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Kya khoob likha hai
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Thank you so very much.😊
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Waah…..Kya bat hai
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Thank you so much.😉😉
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Jindagi ki jang ladna sabke bas ki bat nahi
Ladna wahi jante jante , jinhe jaroorat koi sath nahi
Dum rakhna padta toofano se takrane ka
Ye himmat ki bat sirf soche hue khayalat nhi
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Waah-waah! Waah-waah!
It was incredibly sweet and motivating as it is that I took my exams lately.😂😂
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Life made me a shayar but actually I want to be cricketer and I am trying to play better every day
But jab kahin koi meaningful line padhta hu pata nhi kahan se shayar jinda ho jata h
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Hahaa… that’s great. You’ll compete with Kohli soon. Keep up your efforts and be a Shayar.😊😊
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Thanks for appreciating me but he(virat dada) is my ideal I can’t find myself a compoteter
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I am sorry then. Hshaa😂
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Sorry for what
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Sorry for telling to compete with your idol.😂
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Ya idol( I wrote ideal , which also means not too different) but your one is perfect
U already replied many times if u don’t reply this time I’ll not mind kyunki mujhe to maja ane lagta baten karne me but aap busy rehte ho mere pas do hi kam hai cricket khelna aur jab nahi khel rha hu to sochna ki kab khelun
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I didn’t even notice that u mentioned ideal.😂😂 Hahaa. Don’t you study or eat?😂😂😂😋
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So you are not yet 18 years. Hahaa.😂😂😂
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No I am 19
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kya khoob likha hai….👌👌👌
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Thank you so much. Glad u like it. 😊😉
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my pleasure….ur content is awsm😊😊
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मेरा एक ब्लॉग है, जो मैंने युवाओं के उत्थान लिए बनाया है. इस ब्लॉग पर, आप अपने विचार केवल अंग्रेज़ी में स्पष्ट कर सकते है बिना कोई हिचकिचाट के. मेरी आपसे विनती है कि आप इस लिंक पर क्लिक करे और मेरा ब्लॉग एक बार देख ले. अगर आपको पसंद आए तो लाइक और कमेंट ज़रूर करिए.
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Hahaa..yaar sure. I will be sure to check out.😊
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Checkout my first book give a reveiw on amazon positive negetive doesn’t matter…
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उन्हें क्या पता कि घर कैसे सजाया जाता है
हर तिनका जुटाना होता है और क़रीने से सजाना होता है
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Beautiful
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Nice.
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Glad.😊
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