Was it that he left, or
she never had him.
Silence was her loudest cry,
after he left.
She was like a broken instrument,
Which hated, its own voice.
Everything seemed irksome.
Not able to believe, the ongoing incidents in her life,
She started asking people for advice, considering them sagacious enough to understand her.
But they in turn termed her mad at mind;
and compared her to a chick sidetrack.
The one, who made everyone wait for her; to accompany gorgeous looks
Now knew to how to wait,
sitting recklessly on the footpath,
with a cigarette blowing in one hand and alcohol in the other.
The one who once believed in true love,
Now understood, what torment and dolour meant.
And now knew how to cry within; without letting anyone know.
The eyes that felt hard to carry a little eyeliner,
Nor knew to shed those tears.
The lips, which once bore cherry red outline, beautifying her overall appearance,
now knew the tang of alcohol.
Alas! that tongue, which used to stammer even, while replying to a cute ‘Hi’;
Now knew how to abuse.
For she was vilified at heart,
Drenched up in tears.
Drowning……
Omg! This broke me, Shreya, actually did. Such a beautiful piece. So beautiful.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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So sad… what a Terrible place to be.
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Thank you and it really is.
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😑😔😟 hugs dear friend
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Hugs n flowers to u too. 🙂
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😊💐🌷
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too sad. beautiful but sad.
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Thank you dale beck😉
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Beautiful and touching. You caught the emotions perfectly. 🌸
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Thank you very much isabelle😊
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😓 Is she okay now? Or still on the phase of drowning?
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She was undergoing the same as your friend and I tried to act the ‘you’ so…yes she is well now😋
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😘😘😘 Happy to hear that.. hugs!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗
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It was very beautiful… and i just want to say that you are not alone.. this happens with every other girl or guy.. just have faith in God.. and try to find positivity in this world of negativity.. 🙂
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Thank you very much and I appreciate your concern. I surely try to find positivity though its gonna really tough for me.
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I totally agree that this is tough.. very tough indeed.. but the fact is that in order to overcome those negativity , we have to find positivity, no matter how small it is .. 🙂
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Yups! Its the only way out actually. Thank you😋
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welcome 🙂
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Emotional
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Hahaa! It is
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Fiction or real stuff?
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Mix
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Hmmm happens to all, I think. A phase of life which you wish wasn’t there, but always is there.
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Oh yes! True true. Much more experienced you are:-S
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Yeah Tragic hero for some reason aye 😉
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🙄🙄im trying to hold back my tears
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I am so sorry that it made you cry.
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No problem darling
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This is melancholic.. 😦
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Ya it actually is. Thank you😖
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Emotionally captivating and so happy you can find peace within negative experiences 💜
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Aah! Not yet. Still trying to find. 😋
Thank you.
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😊😀 You’re welcome!!
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💞💞👌👌
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💞💓
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Next time I’ll buy my self some tissues.😢 very awesome.
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Thank you and donot forget to buy😋
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This was SO intense! My heart honestly broke a little 💔
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You flattered me. 🙂
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Wow Shreya, the pain is so.beautifully reflected in the words you have written. Its as if we could feel the tears and the eyeliner spread face. Beautiful!
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Oh! You flatter me every time with your comment!
I guess more the beauty lies in your comment.
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Oh! The pleasure is all mine dear. Pain is something I can easily relate to and when its reflected in such beautiful manner, its hard not to comment. Take Care and Pen More.
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For sure but to some extent I’m sorry for you could relate because I was a sad one. But be happy always😊😋😁
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Oh! Don’t you worry abt me. I have my share of peek a boo moments of happiness in my life to keep me going. But as a person who has known pain both emotionally and physically, I can relate to it.
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This is heart wrenching Shreya but beautifully expressed 😊
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You are the sweetest actually you know. Thank you.
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It’s my pleasure 😘
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Soo deep
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Very nice touched my heart
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Hahaa. Glad u liked it😍
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hello dear, i really like this post,it’s a so useful and important in my life,so keep up and thanks for sharing …. 🙂 🙂
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I am glad you liked it. Many thanks:):):)
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.. True love never leaves forever… when it’s meant to be, it’ll be…
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Oh’ Yes It is really what the love is. you write awesome quotes b.(I do not know your real name). Even on your blog I notice it.
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